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gogreenmarketplace
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 10:57 am Post subject: owner of Go Green Marketplace |
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removed posting due to advertising |
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theartsandlettersofmaggiethecat
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 4:38 pm Post subject: |
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Welcome to eCRATER.
I have a couple of comments/suggestons.
1. Your home page message is great as far as it goes but I would go further to mention you are selling games, toys etc.
2. Your titles are too brief. You need to say in the title if your item is a book, game, video etc. Also if it is new or used. You do not give nuch info in your descriptions but people will not see that because they won't get to see them due to your short titles.
3. I think I like your home page photo. I wish it were larger. |
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tigercreekgifts
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 8:16 pm Post subject: |
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I agree with Maggie. You only list the titles of your games and books and such, and you don't tell people what the item is. Some shoppers don't pay alot of attention when they shop online so, unless you tell people that what they're buying is a movie, video game, book etc. you're likely to have a few confused customers. Also, when people search for items in the ecrater marketplace, most people don't just type in the title, they type in book, movie, or game so the search comes up with the relevant results that they are looking for so, I'd take a few moments to add that information into your titles. You don't have to take my advice, I just think it would make your products to be found in the search more easily. |
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anndabreau
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2012 5:11 am Post subject: |
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welcome |
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