hello new here would like to introduce my store

[majesticdiscounts]

http://majesticdiscounts.ecrater.com/ hope everyone stops by

[tigercreekgifts]

Welcome! Hope you like it here.

[SammysSupplies]

You have to use complete sentences.. Most text you have is one long, run on sentence. Also, don't have all the words on your front page all in caps, that is hard to read.

You have misspelled Busta Rhymes last name in your title for the cd. Having bigger pics would eliminate the google ads you have on almost every page.

Hope you have have many happy sales.

[Precioushouse]

Welcome to ecrater.

[oakteakstore]

Typing everything in all caps is very hard to read. People sometimes think if they do it in all caps, customers will be more likely to read, But just the opposite is true.

Much better to have normal capitalization and also use paragraphs to break up long sentence structure.

[thelivesandlovesofmaggiethecat]

You have a lot of spelling errors and your titles are incomplete. No one can tell what you are selling by the title. Also you don't give enough info to assure a buyer you are selling legitimate material and not boot-legged copies. Since your new prices are so low, you might want to add the info.

[anndabreau]

Welcome and good luck.

[A-Better-Way]

On your plug-in and play joystick, I think I would make it well known, that

all you have to do is plug it into a video input on a TV, the games are built into the joystick.

I know a lot of people know that, but many will just think it's another regular joystick.
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You have a mouse, "with keyboard" I see no picture of the keyboard.
It also says "brand new" however you typed in that it is used.
The check box on the item product should be checked, see "used" check box.

Don't put the word clearance, in the titles so much, search will probably miss the real thing you are selling.Get a spell checker it helps me a lot.

[zickit]

Please do not use this topic to promote your store.

This is to INTRODUCE yourself

You can have one promotional topic in the Promote Your Store section of this forum'

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