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Posted: Sun May 07, 2017 8:49 am Post subject: |
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Welcome, most of your site looks very good. You could use an About Us page.
I do note that your Terms of Service page is a long, convoluted, lawyer up-chuck. It doesn't have anything really to do with your store, nor answers questions a buyer might have like when do you ship, how to get a refund or do a return, etc. You could look at some of the other sellers TOS to see what I mean. I have seen your same TOS when other newbies have come here. Not sure where you guys obtain it from, but most of it talks about things you have no control of such as credit cards, your store being hosted by Shopify (Really?? as far as I know only ecrater hosts stores here).
Quote: | We are not responsible if information made available on this site is not accurate, complete or current | Excuse me, but yes you are! If you make a goof like with a shipping amount not being enough, you can't ask for more funds. You either have to ship at a loss or cancel the sale and tell the customer why.
Quote: | We may, but have no obligation to, monitor, edit or remove content [feedback] that we determine in our sole discretion are unlawful, offensive, threatening, libelous, defamatory, pornographic, obscene or otherwise objectionable or violates any party’s intellectual property or these Terms of Service. | You have no access to change or remove feedback, that is at ecrater's sole discretion.
Those were just some samples of why your terms don't fit your ecrater store, or anyone's store. There is no need for all that legal mumbo jumbo. I like to read, but even I couldn't read through it all.
As I said, your store looks very good otherwise |
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